Friday, April 1, 2016

Zenith. #Z2AChallenge


"We want to reach the stars..."(I will let the irony sink in)
-ak


Sometimes we try,
And we try to be a little better
While we have a feeling
A feeling, that we were never good enough
We are not worthy enough
While we dwell in the past, thinking
What we could have done, 
What else we could have done, differently
We are lost, in the space that so binds us
So vast, yet so suffocating.


We are suffocating in our own breath.
We want a way out, while we battle
Battle for the last fragments we so hold dear.
Pause, we pause with deep breaths
Deep breaths, that should have soothed
That should have calmed the mind,
Instead, it begins to drown us
Drown in the perpetual misery 
The world we created around us.


We were never perfect
We were never right
We only know what we were led to believe
Then why do we feel so lost.
Then why do we feel so alone
We never understood life. 
We thought we knew
We thought we knew better
But we never understood
We were at the zenith once
But the silent whispers gave us away
"For it has all been a lie."

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There is a world that rhymes when you sing.
- ak


#Z2AChallenge , because I can spell the alphabets in reverse!

10 comments:

  1. Its so beautifully Written. Its true that We know Nothing and We can never understand What Life really is.But We can always try be better at living it . Great post to begin the Challenge :)

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    1. Thank you Anoosha. 😊
      Yes, we can always.

      Thank you again. 😊

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  2. A bright thought.It is true we are not perfect.But also understand that none is perfect.So many things we can do betterb than the so called perfect ones can do. So never underestimate ourselves.

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    1. Why, thank you! 😊
      Yes, no one is. I agree. We strive for what we believe is perfect.
      Touché. Completely agree.

      I think I should just cut out my post and put your comment there.

      Thanks for dropping by. 😊

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  3. Very nicely written, though with a sense of loss.
    May be we are never right until we meet the perfect match. Just a thought :)

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    1. Why, thank you. :)

      Yes, you are right. Like the Yin Yang, one can't be complete without the yang.

      Thanks for dropping by. :D

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  4. First of all, I liked this idea of ZtoA challenge. Secondly I have one similar article coming up in my AtoZ challenge. Thoughts are similar.

    Very well written

    Seeya

    www.seeya-sk.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you. :D

      Wow, great people think alike. :D

      Thank you for dropping by. :D

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  5. Ah, this is just beautiful. Specially the last line!
    Why do lies have to be so beautiful? *sigh*

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    1. Because that's what feel close to what we believe in.

      And thanks for dropped by. 😊

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