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Ashes from Fire
A rising Phoenix
Symbolizing Hope.
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Dying Humanity
Fire in the exploited
A Revolution.
P.S. : I had so many thoughts for this prompt. But I just could find the right words to put them into. Those are still hanging incomplete in my book. When I find the right words, I will put them forth before you.
both haikus are so well written... fire inspires so many different thoughts!
ReplyDeleteThank You so much, Laura.
DeleteIt does inspire me too. :)
Thanks for dropping by.
beautiful...:)
ReplyDeletekeep writing..:)
Thank You. :)
DeleteA searing touch, to scorch
ReplyDeleteA rising flame, to destroy
But when handled right, an enlightenment!
There, you made me write one :P Loved your verses
Until later,
Keirthana :)
Wow. WOW. Simply WOW.
DeleteOk. WOW ^(infinity).
Leave mine. Mine is nothing.
Your verses are way way better than mine.
You should write more often, Ma'am.
You are too modest Sir. Anyway thanks for the compliments. And yes I should write more often, but my mind works only part-time :P Hence the lack of continuous writing. Let me try harder.
DeleteUntil later,
Keirthana :)
Now I am thinking, maybe I should take this haiku prompt ;) Let me see
DeleteMe ? Modest ? No way. Just look at those verses and tell me that I am being modest. They were totally awesome. :D
DeleteOh, at least it works part time. Make the most of it. And yeah, you should try harder. Oh, wait. When you are writing without trying harder and it still is awesomely amazing. I am just wondering what would happen if you tried harder. I can see a book 'Poems by K' being published. :D
You should take this haiku prompt. Well, it will act as the building blocks. :)
Take Care. :)