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From within the Cocoon
Rises a colored creation
Having distant dreams
Having distant dreams
Travels bearing sweet nectar
Carrying knowledge of world.
This Haiku is written from 'Haiku Heights April A2Z Heights - Day 02' under the prompt 'Butterfly'.
And that's sheer bliss !!!
ReplyDeleteWhy, Thank You. :)
DeleteLovely traditional haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhy, Thank You. :)
Deletedistant dreams! true!! nice haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteMy Haiku.
Thank You, Sankara. :)
DeleteWow...superbbbb:)
ReplyDeleteThank You, Gayatri. :)
DeleteHmmm.. It carries colorful dreams, almost as colorful as itself is.
ReplyDeleteUntil later,
Keirthana :)
Exactly.
DeleteI am glad my words were clear. :D
Good to see you back. :)
Whoa, after a long time! Okay, seems like you are quite a busy man with office work burdening you :P
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the haiku, the thoughts it speak is awesome (as usual, yet to come up with some other impressive fake word, lol :P)although somewhere I didn't feel the flow. Like the opening line - from and within - both mean same. But the haiku (read the thought and the way you put it)was so beautiful that one (unless a cruel reader like me :P)ignores the English part, will drown in the beauty of this haiku.
I liked it Ajay, really
You can say that.
DeleteBut I am not burdened by it. It is just the time period that sucks. :(
You have a point there, Ma'am. But you see, as good your English might be, some words need to be complete. If I use the word 'within', it's obvious that it starts from there. But you just can't complete the sentence with it. So goes with the other synonymous word 'from'. I would have to leave the sentence hanging with a single thread at one end.
Well, you still like s the idea.I am glad about it.
Thanks, adreamygal. :)
I got that. And since it was evident that you didn't want that line to be hung in air or incomplete, you inserted that word. That's the point. You shouldn't insert for sake of incomplete. You are a thinker and writer man (ummm.. both are same in a way, but get the point right?), you could have written something that would make it smooth.
DeleteAnyway, as usual, I am up for arguing I guess :P
Well, I agree the thinker and writer part, but you see that's the incomplete story. I just think, not enough. I just write, mindless thoughts. So, whatever I might think, I can't put it any smoother. :D
DeleteThank You, Meera. :)
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