Sunday, December 7, 2014

A Beautiful Mistake.


The eyes never left the wall, they couldn't. The wall where the evening crimson sun rays illuminated the center piece like a limelight in the dark theater. It was an art, a masterpiece. The world around him stopped as the seconds turned into hours. Each moment glorifying a memory, a gift, which seldom felt like freedom, like solace. It was pure bliss. 

The masterpiece that hung on the vibrant wall was a monochrome picture engulfed in the colors of black and white. It was odd considering the bright color of the wall, but that framed possession could put any background to shame. It was simple yet unique piece. Everything was odd for a normal eye from the wall to the picture, the frame to the color. Everything. That's what made it more exquisite. No. That wasn't the reason.

It was a sunny afternoon. They had gone for a long drive, striking another item from their To-Do-Before-25. They were passing through the hilly landscape of lush greenery and wheat colored  grass . They had to stop and breathe in the serenity. That pleasant air that brushed the golden grass flakes on the hilly side brought the much needed calmness in their tiresome journey . There was something magical and this being their first rodeo, they never wanted to forget this, this memory, this memory of their togetherness, this memory of the beautiful bond they shared, this memory of their happiness. He was an artist, a painter. He would have loved to have his canvas and he could embrace that memory in the crimson colors of serendipity. She was an artist too, a  sculptor. She would have loved a piece of clay and rest would be splendid. But instead she showed him a Polaroid camera, one from her rare collections, an antique gifted by her father on her marriage. They both were artists sure, but they were no good with a camera. They both fumbled and finished the whole film that they had at their disposal. They had a wonderful time, having fun and a lot of memories to remember. 

He feared the worst for the photos, but he found the one that stood out among them. The one which captured her natural self, her happiness, her shimmering beauty in the sunkissed afternoon, the one which was the product of an innocent accidental snap. Everything about her was perfectly tuned in that accidental capture which spoke about volumes about her. He had to cherish this memory, this mistake, this beautiful mistake which to this day brought back all the memories of them both and the years they spent together. Though he lost her a few years back, but he relived every day with her, staring at her.


20 comments:

  1. Ah...this one made me smile. You write well Boss!

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    1. Oh, I am truly flattered. :)

      Why, thank you. :D

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  2. A post as beautiful as the title...
    Quite senti too...
    I always read your posts..but I nva came across this "lovy dovy kind of posts"..must say this...written very well...;-)

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    1. Aww, thank you. :)
      I tried to avoid that part. But somehow I couldn't. -_-

      Aren't you awesome? Oh, Love is something that needs to be felt. But I never had the chance to, so I try to revive that feeling through this. And believe me, it isn't easy. I kept staring at this post for nearly 2 weeks, just to get it right!

      Why, Thank you. :)

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    2. 2 weeks??? Awesome Ajay..I guess datz d reason it turned out so good."When I first start reading your post, any post,I can't figure out what you trying to say but by the time I reach the end il b like..Ufff...correct title for correct post...well written"...;-)

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    3. Yeah, give or take.
      Oh, thanks again. :)

      Ah, the openings. I am actually very bad at that. My superficial attempt to keep the reader engaged always backfires most of the times. But I'm glad you go till the end. Really appreciate it. That's why I said you are awesome. :D

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  3. Such a lovely piece and the way you have narrated it is brilliant.

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  4. The narration painted an unclear picture of the 'memories' even though you havent described them.

    Beautiful.

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    1. Why, thank you. :)
      And I really appreciate you dropping by. :)

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    1. Hey, not quite.
      This was the post I mentioned earlier. How did I fare ?

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  6. Ah, such a beautiful mistake portrayed in a beautiful post. Awesome!

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  7. True love is there forever ... beautifully written :-)

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  8. Beautiful post...
    Love sir... It is complicated to understand... And many a times, lasts forever :)

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    1. Why, thank you!
      Yeah, it sure is.
      And it sure does last forever.

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