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Lost and Wandering
A Shepard with his Staff
The Guiding Light.
This Haiku is written for Carpe Diem under the prompt Staff, Walking Stick.
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Wow Ajay what a fine haiku you share here on Carpe Diem. I love that last line 'The guiding line' this haiku, to me, has somewhat of a deeper meaning. A staff to lean on and contemplate over things in my life. Very strong haiku.
ReplyDeleteWhy, Thank You. :)
Deletevery well done, Ajay, I liked the picture too!
ReplyDeleteThank You, Meenakshi.
DeleteGlad you liked it. :)
Yes, this is strong and deep.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Cheers!
JzB
Glad you like it. :)
DeleteThank You, JzB.
A shepherd and his staff are inseparable !!!
ReplyDeleteYeah, You are right. :)
DeleteWonderful language with an inner meaning.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the shepherd in Psalm 23.
ReplyDeleteWhacking the Fence
He's sure to find his way....lovely idylc imagery...
ReplyDeleteAnd now when i check everyday u dnt write anything:(
ReplyDeleteYeah.
DeleteGot lazy lately. :(
.... which I regret.
I'll get back soon, hopefully.
I wish..
DeleteMe too...
DeletePerfection Ajay! Love this one. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thank You, Eliz. :)
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