Saturday, January 5, 2013

Winter Trees.

Source


Lost in Delicacy
Melodious, The Snow Song
Winter Trees Dance


This is a Haiku written under the prompt 'Winter Trees (Shiki)' for Carpe Diem.

P.S. : Well, this is my first attempt on Haiku. So, Please Bear with me. :/ And suggestions are totally welcome. Bring them on..

13 comments:

  1. First Attempt? Well this is good! You should write more often, for haiku are one of the loveliest form where words flow in few but speaks volume!

    Liked the song and dance combination! :)

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    1. Yeah, First Attempt.
      Thank You. I will write more. :)
      Yeah, I am just learning about Haiku.

      Thanks, again. :)

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  2. First I love to say 'welcome at Carpe Diem', I am glad that you have found the way to this daily haiku meme. Second ... for a first attempt on haiku .. this is wonderfully composed. You have painted the image which I shared on Carpe Diem with the haiku by Shiki. If you love this poetry form, maybe the Carpe Diem Lecture number 1 is something to read. Haiku has strong rules, but as Basho (a classical haiku master) once said 'read the rules and forget them immediately'. I think that's very wise of Basho to say. Don't be hard with yourself when you write your haiku, enjoy it ... because that's what I do enjoying haiku since the late eighties.
    I hope to see you here again Ajay ... you're so welcome to share with Carpe Diem.
    (PS.: I am the host of Carpe Diem)

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  3. Wow ... the dance makes it special !!!

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  4. "lost in delicacy"- I love that line. :-)

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  5. first attempt? well you should make more^^ beautiful words..

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  6. Very lovely, espec for a first try! you seem to have the basic premise down, and it takes time and practice to learn about and create haiku...keep on keeping on..

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    1. Why, Thank You. :)
      Yeah, I am still learning that. :)

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  7. Its' totally alright.
    Thanks for the comment. :) Really thanks for the advice.

    I will work on it. :)

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