What a strong haiku Ajay ... I love the second line "losing myself in the beauty". Thank you for sharing your haiku with us ... you have an own style of writing haiku ... and that I can appreciate very much.
The problem with eye-colours in books is that they're never the same when seen in reality...hazel,amber,aqua..nonsense. All I've seen so far is black,sometimes brown and fungussy-green! But the haiku's nice!:)
My family has two shades of grey, two shades of green, three of hazel and one of purest jet black...Im the only one wid boring dark brown eyes, much too common b+ve blood group , shortest height,darkest complexion ...what else to whine abt? Il come up with it later, cant remember just now....but yeah..I still can see the world :)
very nice!
ReplyDeleteWhy, Thank You. :)
DeleteYes it is an astonishingly beautiful world isn't it!! (I get lost in it sometimes too)
ReplyDeleteGlad you Like it. :)
DeleteWhat a strong haiku Ajay ... I love the second line "losing myself in the beauty". Thank you for sharing your haiku with us ... you have an own style of writing haiku ... and that I can appreciate very much.
ReplyDeleteHow romantic, that's love.
ReplyDeleteThats' what they say.
DeleteThe problem with eye-colours in books is that they're never the same when seen in reality...hazel,amber,aqua..nonsense.
ReplyDeleteAll I've seen so far is black,sometimes brown and fungussy-green!
But the haiku's nice!:)
You are absolutely right.
DeleteBut they indeed look beautiful. And its a one in a thousand chance to find people with those eyes.
Thank You. :)
Irony is that 'The world I see' is applicable even when she cant see at all....
ReplyDeleteYeah, there is that.
DeleteI didn't realize that...
My family has two shades of grey, two shades of green, three of hazel and one of purest jet black...Im the only one wid boring dark brown eyes, much too common b+ve blood group , shortest height,darkest complexion ...what else to whine abt? Il come up with it later, cant remember just now....but yeah..I still can see the world :)
ReplyDeleteWow. That a lot of varieties.
DeleteDitto. B+ve , dark complexion, etc etc...
Of Course you can. :P
I meant that in those cheesy-romantic phrases that most people(read: People in 'Love') use. :P
what i got frm dis is definitely not wat u meant to say..eh?
DeleteWell, Actually, I don't know what I meant to say - The Truth. :P
DeleteSo, anything you get from this, I will add to the list of assumptions. :P
lol...huh..B+ve ghareeb aadmi:P
DeleteLol..It is just my blood group and not my actual behavior. :P
DeleteBut thanks, I will try to be '+ve', ameer aadmi. :P
love in the eyes !!!
ReplyDeleteYeah. :D
DeleteEyes they capture many beautiful things!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku!
Why, Thank You.
DeleteGlad you Liked it. :)
Eyes are windows to the heart, doesn't matter whatever shade it is..
ReplyDeletenice haiku, btw :)
You are right.
DeleteThank you. :)